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Revise the following paragraph, improving it without changing its overall meaning. As you revise, pay particular attention to combining sentences. Going on a road trip can be fun. A road trip can be a spontaneous adventure. Planning some aspects of the trip can make it more successful. Choose a good time to travel. Avoid traffic congestion. Make a list of sights to see. Make a list of their locations. This saves time thumbing through guidebooks. It is always a good idea to conduct regular maintenance on a vehicle before a long drive. Shops that do oil changes can check other fluids. Brakes should be inspected before traveling. Always consult the weather report before getting on the road. Tires need to be checked for proper inflation and wear. Lights need to be inspected. Be sure to take along a road hazard kit that contains blankets, a first aid kit, lights, and food. Plan nightly stops in advance. It is foolish to drive tired. A top priority needs to be finding a safe place to stop for the night. Finally, make sure there is a current and high quality map in the car at all times. A road atlas works well. Enjoy the trip!

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1. you shouldnt try making others do your homework!!!!
2. It's too choppy. Combine sentences!! I'm not doing the work for you, it's your assignment, but that is what I would do. Combine sentences.
3. your gay
4. Use transition words and conjunctions to combine sentences; they are too short and choppy. (Do you see how I just did that? I formed two sentences into one by using a semicolon.) You really need to do your own homework. If you just sit down and do it, it would take you about 20 minutes.
5. "Going on a road trip can be fun.It can be a spontaneous adventure. Planning some aspects of the trip can make it less stressful and more successful.Always choose a good time to travel, so you can avoid traffic jams. Make a list of sights to see and their locations. This will save you time, so you don't have to thumb through guidebooks. It is always a good idea to conduct regular maintenance on a vehicle before a long drive. Changing your oil, inspecting the brakes, checking the tires for proper inflation, and making sure all of the lights are working are some great things to do, Always consult the weather report before getting on the road. Be sure to take along a road hazard kit that contains blankets, a first aid kit, lights, and food. Plan nightly stops in advance, for it is foolish to drive when tired. Make sue you find safe places to saty for the night. Finally, make sure there is a current, and high quality map in the car at all times, a road atlas works really well. Pack up and enjoy the trip!" I hope this helps.....:)
6. Going on a road trip can be a spontaneous adventure. Planning some aspects of the trip can make it more successful. Choosing a good time to travel avoids traffic congestion. Making a list of sights to see and their locations saves time thumbing through guidebooks. It is always a good idea to conduct regular maintenance on a vehicle before a long drive. Brakes and lights should be inspected before traveling and tires need to be checked for proper inflation and wear. Always consult the weather report before getting on the road.Be sure to take along a road hazard kit that contains blankets, a first aid kit, lights, and food. Plan nightly stops in advance. It is foolish to drive tired. Finally, make sure there is a current and high quality map in the car at all times. A road atlas works well. Enjoy the trip!
7. Going on a road trip can be a fun, spontaneous adventure. Planning some aspects of the trip can make it more successful, this includes choosing a good time to travel, avoiding traffic congestion, making a list of sights to see, and a list of their locations. This saves time thumbing through guidebooks. It is always a good idea to conduct regular maintenance on a vehicle before a long drive, this can be achieved by simply finding a shop that will do oil changes can check other fluids, also, brakes should be inspected before traveling. Always consult the weather report before getting on the road. Tires need to be checked for proper inflation and wear, lights also need to be inspected. Be sure to take along a road hazard kit that contains blankets, a first aid kit, lights, and food.It is foolish to drive tired, so plan night stops in advance, a top priority needs to be finding a safe place to stop for the night. Finally, make sure there is a current and high quality map in the car at all times, a road atlas works well. Enjoy the trip!
8. You know you should've tried revising it while you were typing so I'm going to give you a very very very rough revise.And I'm going to spell this the"Cambridge way" Gnoig on a raod tirp can be a slnauonesopty fun avdrnteue, but olny if you paln the tirp aaehd of tmie a tihs tirp can be a scsues.Smoe tpis to paln are cshionog a good tmie to tvera to aiovd tfrifac and csohoe the sthgis and ltanoicos yuor gniog to see.Tsehe smpile tpis wlil svae you a lot of tmie form lonkiog tgorhuh all the gboiekduos csnohiog werhe yuor gnoig to go,and umtallteiy wntsaig tmie.Aehtnor tnihg is taht you sluohd cnocudt a rgauelr mnteancanie on the vchliee bfroee a lnog dirve.You sluohd go to spohs taht can do oil cgaehns and ccehk for ohetr fdiuls in the car so it can run sltomhoy.Mkae srue the bkaers are wnroikg pfrcelety and ccehk the wthaeer fcarost aeahd of tmie so you wno't be scutk in a tnduehr srotm or hrnucirae wlhie on the raod.Aslo bfreoe and on the tirp ayawls cechk the treis for iltofanin and waer and the ltgihs need to be ipnseectd to mkae srue tehy wrok.Aslo it's a good ieda to bnirg a raod hzraad kit taht has bnatlkes, fsrit aid kit,lgiths, food,and wetar.Aslo paln werhe yuor gniog to selep at in the ngiht,bcseuae it is fsoloih to dvrie treid.You mghit get in a wcerk!Fnalily mkae srue you hvae an uedtapd map on wrehe yuor gniog a raod alats wlil wrok fnie.Wlel,ttah's all you need to konw hvae a ncie tirp! Well there you go sorry for the hard time in reading it but it should come easily if you know all these words and if you don't try to spell it out,well next time try to do it yourself.
9. It's your homework, not ours. Do it yourself. Do your best.
10. DO UR OWN HOME WORK IM ASHAMED THAT I WAS ABOUT TO HELP U CHEAT!!!!!!!!!!!